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| Mykell 2008-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is too emo. I feel like it's saying the same thing 3 times. Maybe you could bring in a reason why death is calling you? |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseIt had more of your poetic tone that I like, and it was to the point, but still, so sad! It's just so disturbing...Maybe I should harden myself more, huh? The Reverse Edge Blade |