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| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseAnother serious thing to say...In all honestly, I think it loses some of its beauty when you express it like this. It's to the point and all, but I think it loses its poetic tone that I love about your haikus when you write it like this. Please know that I don't mean this in a bad way, but the way you wrote this, it got a little too sad. The Reverse Edge Blade |