 The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-05-04 . chapter 1Hmm...
It was truly a beautiful poem, and with a nice message. I liked your descriptions of the words in such a short form. It was just sort of surprising when it got under "haiku", since the traditional meaning of Haiku is short poem about nature. But that's the traditional way of seeing it.
A great work! Keep it up, it was beautiful!
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