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| i owe you a cup of c0ffee 2008-05-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseoh, so they're a shape shifting family! i think it's kinda cool so, uh, did Nightmare became Jane's pet for training of something? and, uh, are all animals in this story supposed to be shape shifters? Sorry, too many questions I'll just read it to find out ^^ I think the story's going too fast though... but if it's supposed to be that way in the first place, then you have no problem I just thought you might wanna go into details first before you get into some action. Just a suggestion. Hope Jane's okay. ^^ |
| i owe you a cup of c0ffee 2008-05-08 ch 1,  | abusereally wanna know where this is going and i loved how you wrote it in Nightmare's POV i wonder what's her secret... oh, and i think it would be better to write in past tense... just a suggestion still, it's all you how it is is fine, by the way ^^ |