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| Rynx-too-genki 2008-05-11 ch 2,  | abuseOh! This reminds me of the song from anastasia at the end... You know... "We were strangers starting out on a journey..." Great poem(s)! |
| Rynx-too-genki 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseSo beautiful!>< *squeal!* |
| Angelskingarden 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abusei like the structure, beautifully formed. symbolism is key. |
| Misstress Nicole 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI like how the poem is orginized. It gives it a neat and thought out appearance. It's symmetrical bar the length of the lines/words and last line. One thing I don't like is the meaning of stanzas that flow into other stanzas. "All our pain and anguish.../Mean nothing." There should be a better meaning in the stanza that comes after. "Because we.../Were given this." Shouldn't the pain and anguish mean something more because it was given to just the 'two of us'? |
| anamika911 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abusethat was really beautiful. especially chapter 1. really, really beautiful. :) |