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Run Over by an Easter Egg
2008-05-08
ch 2,
abuseI am at home reading this, by myself, and laughing out loud. Too loud. I am afraid the neighbors may call the men with the white jackets to come get me with a net.

“You’re sad that your phone is on the ground and you’re on the bed, and it’s hard to face the fact that you’re too lazy to get it?” - that is one of the best lines I have ever read. Fabulous!!
et cetera et cetera
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseHello dear!

This is quite an excitement-filled story you have here. And, it seems like a fun story for you to write, which is to me the best kinds of stories to write. When you're having fun, then you know you've written something worth quality. And having four different characters is pretty neat; you have variety and dynamics, and it's good that they have distinct characteristics. I'm guessing you're Moe? Haha, I can pinpoint my writer of a cousin!

It's a good and fun read so far! And of course, if you need any help don't hesitate to ask me!
SummyHearts
2008-05-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseMy love, what a wonderful writer you are. I must have more.
animefreakgirl
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseOh...this is really really interesting. You really should finish this. Oh yeah the person who I think is you let's say Marley. Haha there's my answer. I'll be waiting for your next update. (:
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