Sorry it's taken me so long to keep on reading. I like this chapter. I especially like the description (of sorts) of wqhat Kitaro is seeing in the clouds and all around him.

Keep up the good work.

Awesome story. I loved it.
Cheeky.

This was a wonderful story, from the beginning to the end. It was so captivating I almost couldn't leave the computer at all because I'd wonder what would happen next.
This also inspired me to continue one of my unposted fantasy stories.

I hope you keep writing!

Fantastic as always! i was on the edge of my seat :D
the characters you have created are amazing, i can see them in my head, their personality, character traits and backgrounds, you have everythin covered!

Your back, yay! This is a great start to another story, that's all I have time to write at the moment, lots of uni work and what not, but I'll come back and re-read it later when I have a bit more time.

YAY the new story! lol that was quick! another awesome chappie :D
thanks xx