Loved it...

Very straight up, passionate and true..

I love how you manage to contrast both of your situations under a similar light, yet end it with the shattering blow of reality.

I hope you have found someone who is there.

Nothing I can say I did not like.

I know what you mean by this but the ending was kinda harsh. But then again your waiting right there for her to come too you so you can help in some way. Nice job hope it works out for you.

XKristie MarieX

Until the last stanza, i was planning on telling you to just let her go but...not now. She wasn't ever there for me but i'll always be there for her to use me and break me but i'll still be there.

it sucks. (NOT YOUR POEM!)

this reminds me a lot of one of my friends. a lot a lot.