I liked this poem. It reminds me of my relationship with someone that was similar to this. The repetition is used well. Very strong emotion in this piece. It really helps strengthen each stanza. Good job.

hm.

Some poems dont make sence inless you no the story. But I kinda get what your saying. Nice last line by the way lol.

XKristie MarieX

OK i'm back with reviews. Srry it took a while. But...

I love the poem. Though i entirely don't get it, i love it.

hun, what the hell happened?

I'll punch him in the face for you, if you want.

Boys suck.

*hugs* he can be so frustrating, but remember you do love him, and he does love you, but maybe you should be the one to always compromise.

(i love you too)