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| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-29 ch 7,  | abuseStupid Izzy! Stupid Sonny! Stupid Jared! It's enevitable (sp?) that Sebastian and Larkin get together! (hint hint) I love all the jealousy and sexual tension! lol Great chapter, update soon! :D HC |
| xoxhp 2008-05-22 ch 6, anon. | abusecute chapter :) update soon! |
| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-21 ch 6, | abuseOh! I thought the whole 'hand on chest' thing was adora-bubble! I loved it! This chapter was by far the best! I loved it! Update soon! :D HC |
| xoxhp 2008-05-19 ch 5, | abusethis is a great storryy! update soon pleas :) |
| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-19 ch 5, | abuseI honestly laughed out loud when I read the bit where Izzy was, 'touching his arm and bicep', that was hilarios for me! Oh, I really hope Sebastian and Larkin get toegther soon! That would be oh so incredibly cute! Update soon!! :D HC |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-05-18 ch 5, | abusegood story |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseaw cute xx |
| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseOh! She's starting to grow on him! I love the little conversation they had, shows that they're sort of starting to get along! Great chapter! :D Update soon!! HC |
| Hopelessly Clueless 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseHey! Great chapter! I love that it was in Larkin's POV! She seems great! :D Update soon!! :D HC |
| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abusehiya great chapter. Really interested in the back ground on sebastian and cecilia. And also Larkin. This chapter shows a little bit about htem. which is great. Love the story angel |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseaw seb doesn't seem very nice lol xx I like larkin |
| Hopelessly Cliche 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseI love the whole race bit where he gave them a head start and still won! That was hilarious! Aw, he sounded disappointed! Larkin seems cool, and Sebastian...well hes got his own little fan club, he should be SO proud! lol Anywho, great chapter! Update soon!! :D HC |
| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abusehiya i love this chapter as well. You can really tell what the characters personalities are. I can see already that ceclia is going to be the go between or the one that smooths over all her brother's antics. Can't wait for another chapter. really looking forward to it. I have to say your first chapter pulled me in hook line and sinker. This chapter did the same. Great writing angel |
| Dylan Marie 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI am loving this story already! I really hope you continue it and I can't wait for more! |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusenice xx |