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| Moon-Chaser 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseI love what you wrote in italics, some interesting questions posed. I don't belive in meant to be's as such, simply an outlining and the rest is up to us. Oh but the ending is just so final, and sad at the same time. Keep it up. |
| Unknown Sorrow 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI loved this poem! It's short, so I'm wishing it were longer because it's one of the compositions that one wishes would just continue on and on because it's so good. Something about the last line though, I think, ruins it. It's almost too abrupt, but overall the poem is awesome! |