Very good! I enjoyed it, the expirence was very real...

I know you've been to the Grand Canyon before...

I liked your story, but not as much as Silvertongue. There were some grammatical errors, but all in all it was a good read. I am glad I'm not Grey, that would be scary at the bottom of the Grand Canyon with a broken leg.

p.s. David Archuleta was the best. (my opinion) :)