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| Her Wishing Well 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing, I absoloutely loved it. Especially the lines 'Our cries are sewn beneath our skin, Pumping through our patchwork hearts' - seriously great imagery. |
| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! I love the alliteration and deep emotions. My favorite line is "We spread our souls upon the hush". Keep it up :) |