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| SEMMU 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. I agree with Miss Dagny. Your sentiments are share here! I'm reminded of Walt Whitman. Write on! |
| Miss Dagny Taggart 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! I didn't know what to expect from your summary, but this was a nice surprise. It flows very well, and it is so descriptive I feel as if I am experiencing the same things as the narrator. My favorite lines are "And my feet hit the rock walkway / I make my way to the pavement driveway"; it sounds musical to me. Keep up the awesome work :) |