I adore the imagery in this, icy tomb, empty air, bathe in cold sound, all of them practically flooded my mind with beautiful yet at the same time almost fearful images.

I love the last verse,

"our icy tomb of music, will realize and break us from our prison" the imagery is wonderful even if the beginning is dark.

I love how you maintain a 'chilly' feel/atmosphere through the entire thing with your choice of words. Like:

creeping, haunting air, silence, bathe...

Good job.

I love the emotion in this. I had to read it over a few times, but I like that it's open to interpretation. Good job. )

This poem is wicked cool! The last two lines are glorious! I like the idea of screaming in empty air... it can be taken in so many different ways! SWEET!

I'm in love with the figurative language in this one. D

Wow - so full of emotion! I love it :)

and "icy tomb of music" sent chills down my spine :D