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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not gonna ask much about this. This is a Biography, of course. It feels welcoming when someone wants to open the door to their emotions of their life. It is pretty dark, I suppose, but I'm a fan of that kind of stuff. Not the bat-killing, but the negative, pessimistic sense of emotional starvation we all seem to neglect from time to time. If you're going to continue this, try to talk about yourself a bit more. Give yourself some credit and character. Well, good luck in your biography. It does seem interesting, and keeping up with this narrative looks to be rewarding. Keep it up. |