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| WisdomReader 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! I could see every thing happening, like I was there. And it also reminded me of vampires for some unknown reason...o.O Poor little boy... |
| S.L.Z.B. 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseSounds good so far. It is nicely written story can't wait to see what will become of it. :) |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAww, how inspiring. (: I really like this, especially the way the mother soothes the boy with 'the hurt always goes away'. It's really comforting in that way, full of hope and meaning, and of course you can probably apply that to any type of hurt. Nicely written! |