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ham337dd 2008-05-11 ch 6,	abuseCan't wait for Grandpa Eric to talk to Al again!
The Datura Rose 2008-05-10 ch 5,	abuseVery suspenceful chapter. I think you could've used more details, but very good nonetheless. Update soon! (I still have no idea how you do it so fast, lol) ~Soph
ham337dd 2008-05-10 ch 5,	abuse-big contented smile-
The Datura Rose 2008-05-09 ch 4,	abuse'He hesitated a minute, but when lightning did not strike him out of the blue sky, and he did not burst into flames, he relaxed,' Heh. I like that part. Nice descriptions in that chapter, you've made me very happy. But what color are his Chuck Tailors?? Yay. I do hope this'll be as long as Eyes. I can look forward to at least thirty more chapters, ^_^. Lol, ta, ~Sophia
ham337dd 2008-05-08 ch 4,	abuseAnother awesome chapter! I think I’m gonna run out of things to say in my reviews, Beast King. Can I just say “Love chapter 5!...Love chapter 6!..Love chapter 7!...”? I mean, if I have a question or see a problem with the story, I’ll certainly say something, but usually I don’t have anything to say. Wait, I do have a question: do you know how many chapters you’ll have? I’ve been guessing that you’ll have at least a dozen chapters…tell me if I’m wrong. Maybe warn me when the story’s near its end so I don’t get hysterical. Whoa, I usually don’t rattle on like this. :) Later, Beast King.
The Datura Rose 2008-05-07 ch 3,	abuseTch. Grandma Sophia? heh. Sheesh. Making me feel old in my ancient teenage years. Good chapter, very expressive. Call me biased, but I do want to know more about Grandma Sophia. And Michelle, too. Update soon! ta, ~Sophia
ham337dd 2008-05-07 ch 3,	abuseI love how real it is. I can feel the father's anger, can feel Al's confusion. The writing's quite amazing. A question: What's Silver City?
ham337dd 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseWell, this just confirms you have a great story going here. :)
The Datura Rose 2008-05-05 ch 2,	abuseHm... interesting chapter. I like Dr. Brightman's hair. I wonder why Frank got all weird... Oh, and you got a sentance correct. “Oh, I’m fine,” said the old man. THAT WAS CORRECT!! What I mean is, say “Oh, but wait” said the old man. That isn't correct. You didn't have a coma after the word 'wait'. You see the difference, yes? Well, update soon (and make sure to review for Like Real, I just posted a new chappie!) Ta, ~Sophia
ham337dd 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseA charming opening chapter. First story I'm favoriting in months. Hope the next part comes soon.
The Datura Rose 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseHA!! Snags first review spot Ooh, good start. Snickers Actually, it's CHARLIE and the Chocolate factory, for future reference. Halfway through the chapter I tried to figure out why this story sounded different, and I realized that it's in past tense. Tch. I MUST be tired. Mwa hahahaha. You really know how to reach me. Through video games. Xbox, Nintendo 64, hehehhehe... er, AHEM. (Though I was never actually a huge Mario fan.) Please update soon! Ta, ~Sophia

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