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| AK the Twilight 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the red sky and black grass descriptions. I haven't seen any descriptions with such dark and shadowed pain before. Aside from some minor spelling errors, this is a haunting and thoroughly dark poem that held my attention from start to finish. It's so easy to picture what you describe, it's simply amazing. Keep up the great work. |