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Reviews For: Betrayal

dani
2008-08-25
ch 10, anon.
abuseaww drystan has a lil crushy thingy. next ch. plz :)
Dani
2008-08-12
ch 9, anon.
abuserawr :) hehe my fav part. yayness!! now wheres ch. 10?
Dani
2008-08-02
ch 8, anon.
abusefinally! whens ch. 9 coming missy!!??!!
Dani P
2008-07-09
ch 7,
abusetis alot better now :) cept i want more. you better be working on this in iowa or else im gonna be very mad at you :)
CrazyCowgirl101
2008-07-03
ch 7,
abuseNO! yOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS! tHE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
CrazyCowgirl101
2008-07-02
ch 2,
abuseOnce again, aplause to the person who gets the horse stuff right! The only thing that I am skeptical about is the fact that deer would be out in the day. Oh yeah, wha time period is this set in?
CrazyCowgirl101
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseWOW! It's really good. No mistakes that I could see and you know what? Its great to ctualy read a story in here where and author actually gets the horse stuff right! Do you ride (as long as you don't mind me asking)? GREAT STORY!! Can't wait to read more!
dani
2008-06-04
ch 5, anon.
abusewow..talk about makeout session. i think youve been reading too many romances ;P
Cory D Hart
2008-05-23
ch 3,
abuseGood start
Dani
2008-05-23
ch 3, anon.
abusefinally!! youd think ud have been done w/ more chapters by now. all your doing is sitting at home ;P
Dani P
2008-05-11
ch 2,
abuseo interesting so far.
better hurry up with the third ch.
Dani P
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abusenice. theres gonna be raping eh? sounds like a story for caleb :P

but i like it so far. try to finish this one plz.
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