 striped feather 2008-05-07 . chapter 1I don't agree with your statements, but I'm just reviewing to give advice.
I'm just going to have to say that a person that makes basic grammar and spelling mistakes is hard to take seriously. Please use a spell check or, better yet, get a beta to help you. Bolding words does not help drive the point home, nor does capitalizing random nouns
You might want to cite sources as well. It could help your argument considerably because it allows the rest of us to clarify things and see their reliability. I know it sounds really schoolish, but you might get more positive comments if you do that.
Watch that haughty tone as well. |