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| WisdomReader 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem mad me feel like I had a rainbow inside me~~!! ^^ |
| ohthevoices 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseI think this one was my favorite. Something about putting the rain in a more positive light... |
| AK the Twilight 2008-05-05 ch 2, | abuseOf the four poems, I personally liked this one the best. The rich language mixes with the constantly changing season of autumn, and you do describe the changes extremely well. I really liked all four of these, but autumn's just managed to grab me. There aren't a ton of words here, but it really didn't matter; the poetry was natural and beautiful. Excellent job with these poems. |
| SEMMU 2008-05-05 ch 4, | abuseVery clever! I enjoyed your nice, simple meter and the soft descriptive tones. My favorite: "Season of the Wind". Write on! |
| ohthevoices 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseI loved these. They were short and sweet, but still gave us wonderful images of each of these seasons. Nicely done. =) |