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| SPOONS Secret Agent Alice 2008-09-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so sweet. It must be nice to have someone like that in your life. -Jenn |
| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is sweet, your stepdad/dad is very lucky! |
| StarStudent 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely, it made me smile, but it also seems really sincere. I think, when the emotion behind a poem is really real, it comes across beautifully, and this one does just that :) |
| Shadowe Goddess 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abusehow sweet... very good job |
| Purpose 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseSweet. I love my daddy too. Of course it might be kind of different because I'm a daughter not a son, but still I love him. |
| Bunnie09 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great! I'm glad that you had a good father-figure in your life. They're so few and far-between these sad days. Great poem! |
| glamorous-giggly-guy 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseAw that's so very very sweet. But bizarre! I've had my step-dad since i was three and he's like my dad too... So i get where you're coming from. |
| FON the Conqueror 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseLike father like son, perhaps? A realistic take on the parent/child struggle. Well done! |