I like this poem alot. You surely do have a talent for writing poetry. I only found one mistake in here. In the second line, to should be too. Because to is like to left of move or go somewhere and too is like more than one and has to do with how many. Over all It was pretty nice. Keep up the good work.

P.s. I writing poems but I also love writing stories. If you want when you get the chance and time you can check out my story CHANGE. Thanks alot. I will be checking in soon to reveiw more of your work. Keep writing.

-Taking to way to many pictures... I think you have an extra to in there
-There’s to many memories... too


I like this... it's very cute and sweet and easy to relate to. Nice job.

I never had a prom, but reading your poem,I think you had a great time.

aww, so cute. great job hun, glad you had a good time.

Sounds like a fun prom night. Nicely written, well put.

~Yusuf