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| kataango 2008-06-03 ch 1,  | abuseah...fluff. such a wonderful thing. it makes a hopeless romantics heart sing! hey! that rhymed! im a poet and i dont even know it! (tee hee) |
| found.eventually 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI thought the ending was perfect. The story itself was good, but slightly draggy at certain parts. But STILL, it was good. Like really, really good. :) |
| SparklingStar25 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseaw..so cute! love it |
| austheke 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! Pictures are like memories on the wall; this idea is used very, very well here. This piece outlines a period of time in two people's lives with simple words that paint a very complex image. It's sweet. =] Only problem: kinda long. Some of it can be toned down. But hey, well done! |
| x3life 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute!! =) |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseaw that was so gorgeous :) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is very sweet. I love the pace of this, and the writing is fantastic. I don't mind that this is merely a recollection of a relationship, good times and bad, rather than the start or end of one. It's a great oneshot, so I'm going to go add it to my c2 now. (: |
| Pinkamoo 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseHah. How cute. I'd probably tell the waitress off for being so old-fashioned! |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseOh it's beautiful. Tugged at my heart-strings. I love the last line =) |
| Ninth.Eternity 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI like it alot! The ending is great. You did a good job of writing a sentimental one shot without it turning out pointless. Kudos to you. |
| outsidersgirl 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abusethis is good |