Reviews for The Raven Extended Version

kloun mannequin 2008-06-12 ch 1,	it's like a tale, the imagery is pretty cute, I like the descriptions about her and him.
CatDog-runs-fast 2008-05-17 ch 1,	Hey hey, this is pretty good. i think the window part is fine. "But his heart he believes Has vanished with his soul He’s lost himself to the darkness Until his light returns once more Until his light returns once more" i like this line, i don't know why, maybe the repeating part at the end?
Annoying as Hell 2008-05-05 ch 1,	Beautiful, yet sad imagery. I love the slight bit of darkness to this poem, and the heartbreak at the end. It is incredibly well written.