MUUR... -_- depressing! It's pretty sad, but I'll read more to see if it gets happier.

Gods. I was sitting at the edge of my seat as I read this. I almost cried when I got to the end. And the fact that I have to wait for the next part made me want to cry all the more. You have absolutely no idea how much I want to kill you right now. You're just too horrible a person, keeping people in such suspense. Please, I am begging, write more. I absolutely hope you finish this story. It is awesome. You are a brilliant writer. Keep up the work.

Mah I would kill you but then you wouldn't be able to finish the story...write more soon cause its awsome!

Gr! You better get writing on that sequel! That is awful! Just horrible and hideous and how could they be so heartless? Gah!

Bloody hell, you know how to pack a punch when it comes to endings. Great chapter, really. Are you going to do the sequel a little bit ahead in the future, or straight after this?

I'm very, very miffed at this cliffie!

OMFC! You are so cruel! Wah I won't kill you though, cause that means no updates!

Oh my God poor Luce! And Gabriel! This is totally not the way I expected it to go. Wow! You are an amazing writer.

I have read M&MV, but I must say I don't like it NEARLY as much as COA, therefore I'm begging you to continue with this story ASAP. Please! I must know what happens. Does Gabrial get tranfered to our world? That would be kinda awesome .

Happy Writing!

HigherMagic x

I don't hate you. I just find the mood changes that Lucian's parents are experiencing far too extreme and sudden to make logical sense. Makes me think they are bipolar or maybe skitzophrenic with personalities that are attuned to one another because niether of them seems to even protest. Almost as if niether have a mind of their own...

*eyes king and consort* not entirely sure whether or not to trust them yet...*shrugs* but i'll go along for now. but if they pull anythin, I swear I'll rip their 'delicates' off and feed them to Fluffy(three headed dog).

aw, I like the name Cyan. very nice. shame, Orin's so cute sometimes.

OMG, Operation: Help Cade!(by any and all means neccesary). lol, blackmail him with smex, nice one!

Making a man with blonde hair and a tan,

Maya

It's good that they've cleared all of that tension up with the demon kings. Now all they have to do is heal Cade.

This was such an adorable chapter. I just recently found this story and I spent most of yesterday reading it all the way through. It was just too good to take a break. I'm so glad things are starting to look up concerning the kings' opinions of the boys. Happy families that get along are always the best(obviously). Kalin needs to hurry up and talk to Cade so they can get that issue sorted out. I hope everything works out for them.

Lovely story so far and keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed reading this. Infact I haven't been able to stop reading since i started. Nice work.

Looking forward to future updates.

and i just wanted to make a comment for ch 26: Gabriel in heat is super SEXY ;) haha.

aw i love the jealus part but it would really be cute if lucien got some competition,yeah?

with love,

maiko

Permanent smile. On my face right now. That was an AMAZING chapter and amazingly cute... lots of waff moments... i loved when Xa-blah-blah came to the door. before i finished reading that part i imagined Gabriel getting all jealous and to make that guy Whatever to be jealous he started pole dancing on Lucien... and they were both naked... Lucien's just looking at X-man like 'you just wish you could touch this again.' and then I raed it and he ALMOST did... but then he just closed the door and they did it... I be like "... what? I thought we were on the same page here! *cries* " but then yea... the dinner party was fun... DAMNIT KALIN! TALK TO CADE! LET HIM GIVE YOU BABIES! Grr... you are frustrating sometimes.

Growing Frustrated Erection Plants in the garden,

F-J

I'm so glad that Seyran and Lyan forgave them. And I can't wait until they know Gabriel's pregnant. I bet there will be lots of Lucien kissing Gabriel's belly once they know. They're so sweet together.