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| Yusuf 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseTime is a relative measurement. And a watch is a tool for that measurement. ~Yusuf |
| Peanuts Factory 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseIt just keeps going and going... Before you know it, you'll be old. I wish I had remote control that could control the time. ;) |
| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI very much love the line "Time is not a private Item" Wow. This is good. |
| Undrahas 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseUNfournatly...Oh well. Very good. I liked it. It show how precious time is...I think so anyway. |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. The repetition was good, and I really liked the idea; portraying the relative insignificance of people who can be so wrapped up in themselves sometimes. Great job. -Thoughtful |