This is very interesting. Make sure you continue this and do not abandon it. People will apriciate you more If you finish to the end, even if the reviews arnt as many as you expect.

The character of Virgil is quite engaging and this chapter shows prospect and potential for future spellbounding chapters. The writing style is very fitting to the narrative so try not to juggle around with that to much.

Please update as soon as possible. I really canot wait to read more.

ooh, this looks verry interesting. can't wait to see how it continues.