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| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-06-21 ch 7, | keep it up - i have nothing to sya for now |
| PrettyAwkward 2008-05-16 ch 7, | Really touching chapter, shows how much you guys really cared for each other. Update. |
| Brittany Danielle 2008-05-10 ch 7, | I just wanted to say that your story truely inspires me more than you actually know. It has even inspired a new fic "Georgia Rain". I have fallen in love with the main characters and I wish you guys nothing but the best, it sucks that you guys got treated the way you did in High School but kids are retarted and they dont care what they do. I am in love with your love story and Elisabeth, I hope you get better soon I can't wait to read the next chapter of your love story. xoxo britt |
| PrettyAwkward 2008-05-06 ch 5, | I think it's amazing how you guys have stayed together that long; I'm happy for you guys. Sorry if that's weird, I just admire people who can actually make it work. I'm liking how you've written everything into a great story. |
| Crystal-Chaos22 2008-05-06 ch 5, | This story is really good. I like how the points of view changed. And ASSAULT!? That dude is crazy. I would've beat him up if that ever happened to any of my friends. Anyway, I LOVE this story. The characters are easy to relate to and i really feel for them. I hope you update soon. I really liked the first chapter, probably because it was based around a Simple Plan song and I LOVE simple plan. They rock. ~Crystal P.S. Could you check out my story? It's called Guitar and I would like some more feedback. THANKS! |
| SoulSecret 2008-05-05 ch 4, | Oh wow... I honestly don't know what to say. Elisabeth...did your father ACTUALLY assault you when he found out about your relationship? Or is this a dramatic version of the true story? Either way, I don't care. I think you are a brilliant writer and I can't believe you posted 4 chapters in one day! This story is addictive and enticing, and I look forward to seeing how the first day of seventh grade goes. And by the way, thank you for the lovely review of my poetry. You are really making me feel welcome in this online community, and I can't thank you enough. |
| skibird17 2008-05-05 ch 2, | Another great chapter! Nicely written. wow, they have a long school day... I love your descriptions- and the fact that Carolyn has such an effect on Elisabeth. And the ending was.. intense. Keep writing, i'll keep reading! |
| skibird17 2008-05-05 ch 1, | You write very nicely! The characters seem very real... I like how, even though there are fourteen kids, you still give them all distinct personalities. I wonder what's going to happen next... I'm going to add this to my alerts so I can keep reading and reviewing! Nice job and keep going! |
| SoulSecret 2008-05-05 ch 1, | Please keep writing-I love the real emotion with which you craft this story. After this fiction is complete, I might like to add it to my C2, if that is agreeable to you. |