First of all, thank you for the kind reviews and my apolgies for returning the favour so late.

I thought this was a wonderful song/poem and the title is perfect for it. The chorus was quite strong and suited the song well. The imagery was wonderful throughout the song ("dark shines", for example. Simple, but effective). All in all, a great piece of work. I enjoyed reading it.

Thanks again!

Okay, that was -officially- a sick nasty song. I loved it, every word. You are a gifted writer and poet, so keep writing!