Reviews for a romance for the sky

McKinley Cooper 2008-06-14 ch 2,	abuse"Smearing her palms with raw innocence." I love it. McKinley
Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-03 ch 2,	abuseyou're too hard on yourself; this poem is great. the imagery is creative and descriptive and the last line is killer. this goes in my favorites :)
Faith Adeline 2008-06-02 ch 2,	abuseno good? This was great! Good work, I loved it :) Faith
East-0f-Eden 2008-06-02 ch 2,	abusethat was very pretty. I love it when ppl talk about the moon/stars. I don't know why.
Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abusewith a name like scarlett, how could I not review? lol "and i write your name across the sidewalk--/just to remember I knew you once" - wonderflul line, it's so profound. This is an interesting prologue! I alsp like the lines that you deleted, especially the last one about ink smudges & skin blemishes, that was powerful. I look forward to reading more!
McKinley Cooper 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseso you can just be the shakespeare--think about it someone needs to fill the empty McKinley
perpetual questions 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuse'my knees ram through the pavement' --wow, cool image. i like the deleted lines as well. -adrian