"Smearing her palms with raw innocence." I love it.

McKinley

you're too hard on yourself; this poem is great. the imagery is creative and descriptive and the last line is killer. this goes in my favorites :)

no good? This was great! Good work, I loved it :)
Faith

that was very pretty. I love it when ppl talk about the moon/stars. I don't know why.

with a name like scarlett, how could I not review? lol

"and i write your name across the sidewalk--/just to remember I knew you once" - wonderflul line, it's so profound. This is an interesting prologue! I alsp like the lines that you deleted, especially the last one about ink smudges & skin blemishes, that was powerful. I look forward to reading more!

so you can just be the shakespeare--think about it
someone needs to fill the empty

McKinley

'my knees ram through the pavement' --wow, cool image.
i like the deleted lines as well.

-adrian