This is so sad...but that's what makes it so good. The last line especially! Your character is so realistic.

Okey Dokey! I read it all :D

I liked it, it was very sweet and very sad. I liked the character, I thought he was very well developed; and of course, the part that is the sweetest is the fact that this little boy is going to turn into a butterfly - and not only that he is turning into a butterfly, but that he is following his Mommy, who is already one.

It's quite sad.

The only part that really bugged me was that I didn't honestly believe all of those thoughts and all that advanced vocabulary could come from someone who "four and three quarters" years old.

Just a thought!

Anyway, great job :D
Katie

Beautiful! Just beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes.

That was such a beautiful, touching story. I was crying the entire time I was reading. My sister over in the other room was probably wondering what was wrong with me. You did a really good job getting the emotions across and the whole becoming a butterfly theme was very sweet. I loved it.

That was powerful. I love your work. I'm really, really impressed.

Congradulations; this may be the most touching thing I have ever read. And I'm not even being sarcastic. This was a beautiful work of fiction.