Reviews for Did You Save Me? - FictionPress.com

ohthevoices 2008-07-14 ch 1,	abuseDid you mean to repeat the first line, or was it just the FP formatting? (Gosh, that's so annoying.) If it was intentional, I didn't really like it; it felt repetitive. I did like the rhythm to this, though. It was nice.
kloun doll 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseit's kinda romantic, it seems you fell for a girl and you see her like a goddess, I guess.
ScarletDreamer 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful. I loved the imagery.
NotABanana 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abuseOh, I like this one a lot. The metaphors are great; very original. Your work is unique, and that's not something you see that often. I like how you took the emotion of love and made it something that people haven't seen before. Nice job. high five I'd love it if you would check out more of my writing - I would like to see what you think.
alittlebitconfused 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abuseNice poem, I liked it. I really got the feeling that you were drowning at the beginning, and your imagery helped carry that through as the poem went along. I liked that it ends on a happy note, though, it gives it a finished sense. The breaking up of your lines also helped it flow. Great :)
SuperTurtle 2008-05-05 ch 1,	abusei like it. It's deep but has a point to it that's what makes them good. I hope you keep writing