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| stardustfaery 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseAh, that was beautiful! It is romantic in a way and I love the inner struggle that happens. Sometimes we wish to be selfish but have to think of the other part of it. "To take her in my arms/ would let her die/ to leave her there in the field/ would mean she would never be with me" was especially amazing. Good job! I like your style very much also. |
| hunnybee4 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abusethis gave me chills. well done. |
| mizzmaryelizabeth 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is written really well. It's beautiful and sad at the same time. Great work. |