interesting choice of poem... mirror...

I like this two lines:

The doll has been cast aside:

A false idol discarded for a real one,

Quite intriguing point you pointed out there!

It only speaks the truth,

And she falls asleep to the program.

I couldn't tell you why, but the last line was the one that really stuck out at me. Maybe cause it's like she's being conditioned to believe what it says in her sleep. Sorry if I'm way off. I'm clueless when it comes to poetry =]

really effective is the word choice.. flows well and delivers the message with precision. Good work.

This was very lovely! Your wording is short and concise- that's a very difficult task.