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| YukinkoMisa 2008-05-07 ch 1,  | abuseKay so this time I can submit a real review. Like I said, I loved it. There was lots of passion and emotions, it was so intense and heated and realistic. You are very talented for one so young. some of the wording could be different, some of the grammar could have been better, and you probably shouldn't have explained so much in your first a/n. But the story was still amazing. I'd like to see more of it! ~Misa (signed and for real this time. :)) |
| Misa 2008-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow that was so awesome. |