I thought it was really odd that the two italicized lines just weren't included in the rhyme scheme. As was capitalizing the last line.

Anyhow... I like the piece though because it is very relatable and true that just knowing someone cares can be enough, even if they can't fit it.

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I can relate to the last verse, sometimes you can't imagine how people care about you.

oh lisa I'm really sorry I havent had time to review. Needless to say I loved the poem. I would love to say more but I really dont have time :P

i had no idea gepp had a heart.



and im very sorry i didnt notice. =[

Aw Sweets. Please come up and be my friend. No one else will be. =[

Everything you write says something to me, like I want friends like that again but I'm still stuck with the shitty ones that don't even tell me anything (I'm her best friend and I'm the LAST one to find out that they're dating? wtf?), and when they ask if I'm alright and I say no, they still ignore me (like they pretend I didn't say anything at all). I'm just so frustrated right now, god I wish I had someone that actually cared that I could owe something to.

I've missed your poetry/reviews. Hope you're still doing okay... Are you? I promise I won't walk away if you say no. =]

-stix-

I so understand what you mean! I can so relate, then you always have that one friend who can notice without hardly saying a thing. Keep him ^_^ Lovely poem my dear sweets. Keep up the awsome work.


XKristie MarieX