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Airaceir
2008-05-06
ch 1, 		abuseSomewhat intriguing. The question of what you lose...this kind of sent me thinking a lot =)

A really good one here! you had me until the very last line. But the characters were a little confusing, you might want to be clearer about that ^.^

Keep writing!
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