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| ten pts above average 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this one. Although im complete opposite. Im not the home sick type and I cant wait to get out of this hell whole and start a new life. Tell your friend she's crazy haha. Kidding. This is a good piece. I like the 'where are we supposed to go? what are we supposed to do?'. Im a fan of repetition. |