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| D.Doberman 2008-05-06 ch 2,  | abuseChapter 2 was short. Oh! and BTW, FictionPress puts the first couple lines as a chapter title on the same page, so people read the same thing twice. Here's two reviews! |
| D.Doberman 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseHey, Yoseph, I read this over at my house Monday, and I saw the word PCI... and there were some other things. Other than that this was really good. But I would've recommended you put the chapters on different days, therefore people would've seen it more than just as as a new story. Just a little hint. ;) |