Reviews for The War Never Ends

DigitalScripter 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abuseFirst little bit there could probably use some polishing. The rest was very well written.
HeavenShallBurn 2008-05-09 ch 3,	abuse-applause- x3 Keep going! This is just awesome!
Reflex 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseHmm...well, after reading both chapters, I'm still not sure what you're trying to do here. Is there a reason why one account is in third person while the other is in first person? It's kind of confusing as of now. Meanwhile, I like what you did with the first chapter. It had emotion in it. However, I think you kind of messed up the first paragraph there. Chapters could also be longer. :) Just some constructive criticism. Keep writing!
HeavenShallBurn 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseI'm likin' El-Tee. ;] Great chapter, Lieutenant. Well written. Update asap.
HeavenShallBurn 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseHmm. This is interesting. I'm not quite sure if it's realistic but it's pretty good so far. :] Be sure to update.
D.Doberman 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseOH! I wasn't expecting that to happen. Great start. I'll be waiting for chapter 2