HA!
I love Patch, I bow at his magnificence.
I think he should go home after work before he gets ready for whatever the evening might bring. If he walks or takes the bus there's a chance he may run into McSexyPants again and that really needs to happen.

I love this story.

It is now a favorite, a alart, and in my bed.

okay...this is soo funny! me likey!
Okay...my idea is...*drum roll*
probably the beach...and...hitching a ride, becuase i like Mia! She rocks! lol.

Only one question.. where is the update??

The whole business feuding thing? We totally have that at our work. Not necessarily to that degree, but to the point where if any other people in uniform from other grocery stores come into our store, we glare really menacingly. Once we had some other grocery store's shopping cart in our store randomly. I almost attacked it on sight. XD

I suppose I should participate, hey? My vote goes to: go to the mall, with Mia... and run into Cole ^^

I really like this piece, I say continue! Onwards and upwards and all that. XD Cheers.

haha, i lurves it, long time. My opinion is D, and D =] please update soon, I'm in love, really!

PFT! xD That was brilliant. Shooing out the customer and mooning the entire Coffee King at the same time, I applaud you boyyo.

Now I'll be going to vote on the poll you mentioned. Cya next chapter!

wow...i love patch's personality :P cant wait for more

Omg I'm was practicaly rolling on the floor...that was awsome so funny...I think he should go clubbing or something with Mia... :)
FCGYT

I like the idea of an interactive story. It reminds me of those pick a scene type books I used to read. Anyway . . . I think Patch should ride his skateboard to the beach. :)

skateboard to the mall, though i suppose he could go past the beach on the way.

wicked awesome story i love it, makes me laugh :D

Hilarious story thus far with a quick, nifty writing style that's perfectly suited to not only the genre but the idea of playing off of reader suggesters. XD I like the idea of interacting with the readers. Thumbs up for executing the idea with flair. I vote for c) go to the mall, and c) take the bus. I look forward to seeing what else you have up your sleeve!

lol XD Is this the end of MR. Mcsexypants?!

I choose to the mall hitching a ride!

...is too lazy to login. Thank you so much for your review on Dirty South!

XD The voice of your characters is so realistic and delightful! I think the idea of an interactive story is great and i'm going to check back for updates.

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This is so funny so far

It's good so far, too bad i'm braind ead atm D= or i'd throw out some ideas. keep up the good work.