|Reviews for Into the Light|
| Adenil 5/6/08 . chapter 1
Yowza. I really like this one. It's just... perfect. It makes sense in such a way so as not to make sense. Does that make sense? I like it all. One line seemed backwards, though: "I out streach my hand..."
Yeah, 'streach out'? Maybe? Just a suggestion.
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 5/6/08 . chapter 1
I don't really get the meaning, but the whole concept is kinda beautiful.