amazing, simply. good amount of that thing we poets call "feelings" nd a kind a end o the world vibe i get. i like it. B plus.

wow, this is so..like..uh..raw.

really good, with all those words you used.

loved it! totally my kind of poem.

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Ja ne

Do you need a hug? It's free hug day. *Hugs*

It is very emo-ish, and I'm not bashing. I love the beging, but the end type part was a tad overkill. Sort of like, oh! The ANGST! (No offense intended)