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Reviews For: The Savoury Grass and Regal Cat

Trinity Dragon
2008-07-26
ch 1,
abuseI thought I'd read a couple more. It sorta reminded me of that song, Deep Enough to Dream (not sure if you've heard it). But It's a good companion piece at least to that song.

And the author's notes at then end made me smile.
The Un-great-ful
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseI like the incorporation of the squashed bug, that was interesting.

You derive your poems from your life and the things around you, which is something I rarely do, I mainly dredge mine from the depths of that incredibly dark microchosm I call a brain.

IT is good that people find such differing inspiration for their writings, it helps to illustrate ones personality.

Once again, lovely imagery here.

Alan.
wolfeh
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseI do like it! Poor bug, though... But I love the way it's written, especially:

'Who requests my hand beneath his whiskered chin,

And the company to lie with and while the day away'

:D

Keep writing!

~ Wolfeh
under the influence
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseI guessed that you squished the bug...that part made me chuckle...nice poem
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