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| Trinity Dragon 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI thought I'd read a couple more. It sorta reminded me of that song, Deep Enough to Dream (not sure if you've heard it). But It's a good companion piece at least to that song. And the author's notes at then end made me smile. |
| The Un-great-ful 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI like the incorporation of the squashed bug, that was interesting. You derive your poems from your life and the things around you, which is something I rarely do, I mainly dredge mine from the depths of that incredibly dark microchosm I call a brain. IT is good that people find such differing inspiration for their writings, it helps to illustrate ones personality. Once again, lovely imagery here. Alan. |
| wolfeh 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI do like it! Poor bug, though... But I love the way it's written, especially: 'Who requests my hand beneath his whiskered chin, And the company to lie with and while the day away' :D Keep writing! ~ Wolfeh |
| under the influence 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI guessed that you squished the bug...that part made me chuckle...nice poem |