Reviews for The Door of Dreams

Reviews For: The Door of Dreams

Carizard 2008-07-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseI liked it especially because an 8 year old wrote it.
Stopdamadness 2008-06-30 ch 2,	abuseThis story is awesome! And your little Sis wrote this? I'm so jealous! She writes better than me! Anywyay, tell her she did a great job.
rhainetsuki 2008-05-17 ch 2,	abusecute story,its cool your little sister wrote it! tell her shes a good writer!
I Quoth Nevermore 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseAww! This is awesome. I'm thinking about writing stories for younger kids and this is a great way to get into the mind of an 8 year old. I think it's great. I hope she writes more soon!
violetglow 2008-05-08 ch 2,	abuseAn interesting story. I love the simple language! When I was eight my stories were all prim and proper, littered with the 'long words' small kids are so fond of. And this story is so sweet and simple. Cute. Your sister seems to have talent. Encourage it.
SailorWednesdayMercury 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseCool Story!
Aryna Heart 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abuseI can't believe your EIGHT year old sister wrote this. It's soo cute, and it's really good for her age. Tell her that she needs to keep writing, the more she writes the better she'll get.
JoeyJinxstar 2008-05-07 ch 2,	abusethis was cute. good job =] i have eight year-old cousins that write stuff like this. very cool.
Millicent_Quack 2008-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abusewow, this story is awesome! i can't believe an 8 yr old wrote this. there's hardly any grammar mistakes and i can't wait for the next chpter.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseA very nice idea. (: My one suggestion is to space this out more evenly. As it is, this is spaced out more like a poem than a story, though this might be the fault of fictionpress. The punctuation and grammar are very nice, too. Except for some minor mistakes ('“Okay.” Said Maria' should be "Okay," said Maria,) your sister did a good job. She should keep writing.

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