Aw. That made me smile. I loved the fact that it was simply dialogue, it made it very interesting and vague at the same time. Fantastic!

this was adorable. i liked just having the dialogue for a change

-giggle- So fast moving

Me likes it XD

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Lol, funny and cute!

Nice! I really like how you can put so many emotions in just a plain conversation.

Teehee. :). I wonder what life will be like when they're both old and wrinkly people. Well written.

I absolutely loved this!! Awesome awesome story...I loved the only dialog, it was really funny. Also, the sarcasm and wit was very well written. Good job! :)

haha, wow. Interesting dialogue. I love it.

It's sweet. "I just walked into your lips by accident." Love it!

I think it might make more sense if there was more than just dialogue in this story, but it's good as it is right now.

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~Caecilia

I liked that it was made up of dialogue. It was an enjoyable read. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

Ohohoho! How did I know that was going to happen?

Brilliant, just brilliant!

gulistanlik

That was adorable. It was dialogue only and kind of confusing, but I got it. (:

Ha ha...

ah
its so cute
to bad real life doesnt work like that
lol

Sweet one-shot. I wouldn't mind reading a bit more.

Oh, he obeys her commands. Good boy, very good boy. Kisses on demand, what more could you ask for?
Very cute story, I liked!