i know this is way more of a comment than a review, but I thought i'd just let you know i thought the ending was really cute and i awed at the end. The rest of the story was rad as well.

i loved it... really great...Very good story! Thanks for writing it...

Dude, I totally didn't see that coming. Just...wow.

I love every bit of this... the suspense, the angst, the drama, the love, oh and the epilogue was great. I love that it was far in the future and that we are able to see them way down the road. Let's see... oh and the HUGE TWIST?!?! Oh my... that was great! Superb writing! Hope to see more from you soon!!

xoxo
jennie

I am starting to get it all now. I love how everything was mysterious and now the kinks and questions are being worked out! Great job!

xoxo

Like it so far! Can't wait to see where this goes!

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jennie

it was a great story.. but aw man! lol. I was hoping phillip would get back with the blonde in a sequal or something. he still has some issues to deal with!

So far, the story is great, and Chapter 17 had a lot of exciting moments in it. It kind of reminded me of an action scene you would see in a movie--there was a lot of pain, blood, and running involved.

i really liked this story!! :D good job!

Aw, what a cute ending! I loved it! I can't believe they had three kids, damn. Hahaha. Very cute. The only thing I'd do is put that it's ten years later in the beginning. Just so there's no confusion. Other than that, perfect. I can't wait to read more from you. Do you have any more stories planned? You're a great writer, so I hope you do :)

aw so cute, so sad its the end.

What you got in the pipeline?

Aw, poor Kara. Great chapter. What a twist! I loved it :) Keep it up and update soon :)
Faith

Aw, she's pregnant! Yay! Good chapter, as was the last. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

I'm glad they were so understanding about Kara and Derek...because it would actually suck if they were fired. And I guess it would've sort of killed the story, heh.

Phillip near death is BAD. Because he's Phillip, and he's awesome. =/

-still from the Review Marathon (link still on profile)

NO NOT PHILLIP! I don't like that so much, I guess, though I did like the action because it's about time we had some...of a different sort, heh. ;)

As always, I love Derek, because he's funny and hot and apparently cooks, which is always hot.

Jake can go to hell.

-courtesy of the Review Marathon, which is helping me to procrastinate/read this weekend (link on my profile)

I'll be back later. Interpret that as you will. ;)