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| Katherine-the-greate 2008-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseneat beginning. i'm interested in reading more. |
| IncapableDreams 2008-08-24 ch 4, | abuse:D I'm loving this story already. I never read anything like it before. Haha, I like JT. :) |
| xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-08-21 ch 4, | abuseOMG I'm such a fangirl for JT! I never knew he was so...eep...adorable (not really the type to go fangirl for ANYONE!) Your characters are so cool, mine suck :( Eh oh well, why haven't you emailed lately? You know you can email me for ANYTHING, it doesn't have to be about Fics ya know. Yes their relationship is cute I love it. So nice chapter, good to see from you and drop an email once in a while will ya! I want to make sure you're still alive XD |
| clumsybella15 2008-08-19 ch 3, | abuseI didn't know you had a) changed the title and b) posted a second chapter... I love it! Although there's more dialogue than description, you have to find a balance between the two. And no, I haven't figured out what you're going to do, it's not obvious. At least not to me. Jadaline and Bella's relationship is different than any I've ever read before. I like it. I also like the song "No air". For a while it was on my list of favorite songs, but that list changes every few weeks or so. Right now it's - wait. If I write the songs this review will be way too long. By the way: love decagon? As in "ten"?! It's a change from love triangles... What song will you use next? |
| xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-08-07 ch 3, | abuseHm...a mind-reader huh? And Jade's a hypbrid, no way! Cool so...you're right about not being able to perdict what's going on and NO YOU'RE NOT THE ONLY ONE READING THIS! Tch how dare you think that!? ::rolls eyes:: Anyways I'm interested to find who the mind reader is...ooh ooh is it that you-know-who you emailed me about before a while back? And the boys didn't know about Bella's abilities before...you BETTER start posting too girlie XD |
| xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-06-23 ch 2, | abuseYou made me laugh, interesting. Keep going and that's pretty much that. XD. |
| xxXEvil MunchkinXxx 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseHm...interesting can't wait for you to elaborate on it. Try giving some details that evoke the 5 senses or something...that's what I try to do anyways. |